script.rpy

@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ label prologue:
     scene black with Fade(2, 1, 0)
     extend " Parasite..."
 
-label act1:
+label act1_part1:
     nvl clear
     play ambient fanloop fadein 0.5
     scene black with Fade(0, 2, 0)
@@ -219,29 +219,14 @@ label act1:
     nvl clear
 
     show null boast sohappy at right with dissolve
-    extend " Wake uuuup!!!!"
+    extend " Body needs food!!!!!"
     advnarrator "I feel that thing's finger poking my cheek."
     advnarrator "I know she's not physically there, but I still feel her..."
-    advnarrator "This weird fleshy thing is staring right at my sleepy body."
+    advnarrator "To think someone like this could show herself to me anytime she feels like it."
-    advnarrator "Seeing her at this angle, down from the comfort of my bed..."
+    advnarrator "What a bother..."
-    advnarrator "Being able to watch the shaky, noisy ceiling fan above her,{w} everything framed by the darkness and the trash thrown around the room..."
-    advnarrator "She seems really weirdly imposing."
-    advnarrator "I'm not exactly scared of her, but...{w} To say the least, this is not a calming first thing to see after waking up."
-    advnarrator "Furthermore, to think someone like this could show herself to me anytime she feels like it..."
-    advnarrator "Ahh, what a pain..."
     irida "You're so annoying.{w} Just give me a second..."
     show null boast annoyed at bouncetransition
-    null "Give you a second?{w} Don't you know how late it is?!"
+    null "Give you a second?!{w} Nutrition is serious business, you know?{w} Take that body of ours seriously or you'll lose it!!"
-    advnarrator "I squint, staring right at the parasite in front of me."
-    irida "...No??{w} Do you?"
-    show null boast thinking at bouncetransition
-    null "Well, no, but..."
-    show null boast annoyed at bouncetransition
-    null "Don't you feel our tummy rumbling?{w} It's like nature's alarm clock..."
-    show null boast pout at bouncetransition
-    null "Our body needs foooooood..."
-    show null boast annoyed at bouncetransition
-    null "Nutrition is serious business, you know?{w} Take that body of ours seriously or you'll lose it!!"
     irida "Lose it, huh..."
     advnarrator "I exhale a bit...{w} I lost it the instant you became a part of it, didn't I?"
     show null boast pout at bouncetransition
@@ -281,31 +266,10 @@ label act1:
 
     show null boast annoyed with dissolve
     null "Are you fucking serious?!"
-    irida "What? It's food, isn't it?"
-    irida "Would you rather I go without eating entirely?{w} The pantry's looking pretty sad..."
-    advnarrator "I gesture my hand towards the open cupboard."
-    advnarrator "Just a glance inside makes it hard to argue against what I'm saying."
-    advnarrator "Of course, that's by design though.{w} And the parasite knows as much."
-    show null boast pissed at bouncetransition
-    null "And whose fucking fault IS THAT, Irida?!"
-    null "I've got half a mind to wipe that smug look off your face!!"
-    show null boast annoyed at bouncetransition
-    null "Acting so proud of staying malnourished..."
-    null "As if you're not eating for two!!!!!"
-    show null boast pout at bouncetransition
-    null "Can't you show a little consideration?!"
-    irida "Hmmm..."
-    advnarrator "I deliberate...{w} But of course, no matter how much she protests, I'll probably never be happy to accomodate for her in my life."
-    show null boast annoyed at bouncetransition
-    null "You lazy, selfish fucking..."
-    show null boast pissed at bouncetransition
-    null "UGH!!!{nw}"
     hide null boast with dissolve
     nvl clear
     advnarrator "With a pissed off look, NULL disappears from my view."
-    advnarrator "I wish she'd at least be a little less loud when she's upset."
     scene black with dissolve
-    irida "......{w} Huh?"
     advnarrator "I start to feel something wet and writhing wrapping itself around my arms."
     advnarrator "No...{w} Not this...{w} Anything but this."
     advnarrator "The can I was holding is unceremoniously dropped onto the floor,"
@@ -314,7 +278,6 @@ label act1:
     advnarrator "Looking down at my hands, I can see..."
 
     scene cg_takeover_hands with dissolve
-    play music evil fadein 4.0
     advnarrator "Entrails coil around both my arms, wrapped tightly into helixes."
     advnarrator "I know well by now they're just in my mind, but still...{w} I feel them."
     advnarrator "They're disgusting, alive, the feeling is all too convincing, it's so wet, and it won't stop pulsating."
@@ -400,8 +363,8 @@ label act1:
     null "... Oh, that doesn't feel good."
     irida "Huh?"
 
-    play sound knocking_a_wall
+    # thunk sfx w pause
-    pause 1.5
+    # also next part should be HEAVY on the sound effects, heaving, gagging, whatever
 
     nvl show Dissolve(0.5)
     nvlnarrator "Suddenly thrust back into my body, I fall to my knees."