script.rpy

@@ -261,14 +261,11 @@ label act1:
 
     nvl clear
 
-    nvlnarrator "Shrugging NULL off, I get up, making my way through the living room to get to the kitchen." 
-    play sound waste_cans
-    extend" Every step I take must be careful, lest I step on a trash bag or any other sort of
+    nvlnarrator "Shrugging NULL off, I get up, making my way through the living room to get to the kitchen.{w} Every step I take must be careful, lest I step on a trash bag or any other sort of
     bullshit thrown about."
     stop ambient fadeout 10
     nvlnarrator "Most common are the plastic cups all around, all of them still with a few drops of sweet drinks clinging to their rims.{w} Some were tucked inside various takeout and plastic bags, which were also
     thrown about in ample amounts."
-    play sound waste_cans
     nvlnarrator "Everything that could be piled up is piled up.{w} There are a few pockets of trash that might as well be makeshift pillars.{w} Even in the rim of my own bed sits a pillar of filth."
     scene kitchen with dissolve
     nvlnarrator "I used to tell myself the day would come where I'd regain my energy and bring it all back to the way it should be, but by now I've accepted it...{w} I will die taking in these sights, and smelling this
@@ -453,8 +450,6 @@ label act1:
     nvlnarrator "I close my eyes, pretending not to care about the present nastiness.{w} I just need to rest...{w} Forget everything, and just rest."
     nvlnarrator "......" 
     scene bathroom with Fade(0, 0.5, 1)
-    play sound waste_cans
-    play ambient waterdrops fadein 1.5
     extend " The first thing I do when I get up is head to the bathroom, still needing to step carefully through the apartment, and wipe my face.{w} I don't bother with the puddle on the floor...{w}
     I don't have it in me right now."
     nvlnarrator "Desperate to get my throat to stop burning, I also sip some of the sink water.{w} It doesn't really help.{w} Not sure what I was expecting?"
@@ -491,7 +486,6 @@ label act1:
     nvlnarrator "Well...{w} My hair continues to look unruly, the ribbons loose and frayed...{w} nevertheless,{w} it'll be better than nothing."
     nvl hide Dissolve(0.1)
 
-    stop ambient fadeout 1.0
     scene bed with Fade(0.5, 0.2, 0.5)
     nvl clear
 
@@ -658,7 +652,6 @@ label act2:
     incidental "May I help you with something?"
     show null boast creep at bouncetransition
     null "Well, Irida?{w} May she?"
-    play sound heartbeat_single
     irida "Ghh...{w} Ahー"
     advnarrator "I bite my lip before anything uncouth comes from my mouth."
     advnarrator "Hoping to trip me up, NULL begins talking as soon as I'm about to open my mouth."
@@ -668,24 +661,19 @@ label act2:
     advnarrator "I must look insane."
     advnarrator "Just focus, focus on what you have to say next..."
     irida "I have a meeting with..."
-    advnarrator "...{w} Oh,"
-    play sound heartbeat_single
-    extend " my god.{w} Don't tell me I forgot already..."
+    advnarrator "...{w} Oh,{w} my god.{w} Don't tell me I forgot already..."
     show null boast smug at bouncetransition
     null "Pfft...{w} Really?"
     irida "Umm,{w} for my,{w} s,{w} severance package..."
     irida "It's...{w} one, um,{w} one s, {w} second..."
     advnarrator "I reach for my pocket."
-    play sound heartbeat_single
     null "You need to check on your PHONE?"
     show null boast smugopen at bouncetransition
     null "That's so disrespectful, Irida!"
     null "Surely it can't be that hard to remember someone you've worked alongside for the past year,{w} at LEAST?"
     show null boast smug at bouncetransition
     null "Your brain is REALLY fried, huuh?"
-    irida "And whose faー " 
-    play sound heartbeat_single
-    extend " khh!!"
+    irida "And whose faー{w} khh!!"
     show null boast closed at bouncetransition
     advnarrator "I bite my lip, almost finding myself retorting back at NULL out loud."
     irida "S, Sorry...{w} One second, please..."
@@ -696,7 +684,6 @@ label act2:
 
     advnarrator "Seems she finally took note of how flustered I seem.{w} But she's still keeping it professional..."
     irida "Something like that...{w} Ahaha..."
-    play sound heartbeat_single
     advnarrator "Oh my god, what an awful response. What the fuck was I thinking?!"
     show null boast smug at bouncetransition
     null "Pfftttt....{w} Ahahaha!!{w} This is so much funnier than anything I could've expected!"
@@ -704,7 +691,6 @@ label act2:
 
     nvl show Dissolve(0.2)
     nvlnarrator "Shut up."
-    play ambient heartbeat_strong fadein 1.5
     show null boast thinking at bouncetransition
     null "Maybe you had a point, earlier...{w} I wouldn't be having this much fun if I had a distinct body, right?"
     nvlnarrator "I don't care, so just shut up."
@@ -726,7 +712,6 @@ label act2:
     null "We must be made of the same stuff."
     null "Just two no-good girls that start nowhere and lead nowhere."
     nvlnarrator "I CAN'T FOCUS LIKE THIS SO JUST SHUT UP ALREADY!!!!!!!!{nw}"
-    stop ambient
     show ol scared at bouncetransition
     irida "Mrs. ◯◯!!!!!"
     incidental "I'm sorry?!"
@@ -767,8 +752,6 @@ label act2:
     show null boast smug at rightfar
     stop sound
 
-    play ambient heartbeat_strong
-
     advnarrator "..."
     advnarrator "I, um...{w} I only see one person around now."
     advnarrator "I don't have to worry about people watching my freak-out."
@@ -793,8 +776,6 @@ label act2:
     scene cg_intersection_girlandmeat
     stop sound
 
-    play music breathing volume 0.5
-
     nvlred "Let's do it, Irida."
     nvlred "I don't have to spell it out, do I?{w} We're the same, after all."
     nvlred "In fact, I'm sure you thought of it too."