act 1 start rewrite
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@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ label prologue:
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scene black with Fade(2, 1, 0)
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extend " Parasite..."
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label act1_part1:
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label act1:
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nvl clear
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play ambient fanloop fadein 0.5
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scene black with Fade(0, 2, 0)
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@ -219,14 +219,29 @@ label act1_part1:
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nvl clear
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show null boast sohappy at right with dissolve
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extend " Body needs food!!!!!"
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extend " Wake uuuup!!!!"
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advnarrator "I feel that thing's finger poking my cheek."
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advnarrator "I know she's not physically there, but I still feel her..."
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advnarrator "To think someone like this could show herself to me anytime she feels like it."
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advnarrator "What a bother..."
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advnarrator "This weird fleshy thing is staring right at my sleepy body."
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advnarrator "Seeing her at this angle, down from the comfort of my bed..."
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advnarrator "Being able to watch the shaky, noisy ceiling fan above her,{w} everything framed by the darkness and the trash thrown around the room..."
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advnarrator "She seems really weirdly imposing."
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advnarrator "I'm not exactly scared of her, but...{w} To say the least, this is not a calming first thing to see after waking up."
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advnarrator "Furthermore, to think someone like this could show herself to me anytime she feels like it..."
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advnarrator "Ahh, what a pain..."
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irida "You're so annoying.{w} Just give me a second..."
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show null boast annoyed at bouncetransition
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null "Give you a second?!{w} Nutrition is serious business, you know?{w} Take that body of ours seriously or you'll lose it!!"
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null "Give you a second?{w} Don't you know how late it is?!"
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advnarrator "I squint, staring right at the parasite in front of me."
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irida "...No??{w} Do you?"
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show null boast thinking at bouncetransition
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null "Well, no, but..."
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show null boast annoyed at bouncetransition
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null "Don't you feel our tummy rumbling?{w} It's like nature's alarm clock..."
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show null boast pout at bouncetransition
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null "Our body needs foooooood..."
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show null boast annoyed at bouncetransition
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null "Nutrition is serious business, you know?{w} Take that body of ours seriously or you'll lose it!!"
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irida "Lose it, huh..."
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advnarrator "I exhale a bit...{w} I lost it the instant you became a part of it, didn't I?"
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show null boast pout at bouncetransition
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show null boast annoyed with dissolve
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null "Are you fucking serious?!"
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irida "What? It's food, isn't it?"
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irida "Would you rather I go without eating entirely?{w} The pantry's looking pretty sad..."
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advnarrator "I gesture my hand towards the open cupboard."
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advnarrator "Just a glance inside makes it hard to argue against what I'm saying."
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advnarrator "Of course, that's by design though.{w} And the parasite knows as much."
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show null boast pissed at bouncetransition
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null "And whose fucking fault IS THAT, Irida?!"
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null "I've got half a mind to wipe that smug look off your face!!"
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show null boast annoyed at bouncetransition
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null "Acting so proud of staying malnourished..."
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null "As if you're not eating for two!!!!!"
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show null boast pout at bouncetransition
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null "Can't you show a little consideration?!"
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irida "Hmmm..."
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advnarrator "I deliberate...{w} But of course, no matter how much she protests, I'll probably never be happy to accomodate for her in my life."
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show null boast annoyed at bouncetransition
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null "You lazy, selfish fucking..."
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show null boast pissed at bouncetransition
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null "UGH!!!{nw}"
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hide null boast with dissolve
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nvl clear
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advnarrator "With a pissed off look, NULL disappears from my view."
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advnarrator "I wish she'd at least be a little less loud when she's upset."
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scene black with dissolve
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irida "......{w} Huh?"
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advnarrator "I start to feel something wet and writhing wrapping itself around my arms."
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advnarrator "No...{w} Not this...{w} Anything but this."
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advnarrator "The can I was holding is unceremoniously dropped onto the floor,"
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