big edits and additions to cg_deadbody scene

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nvl show Dissolve(0.5)
nvlnarrator "There's a body...{w} Sat next to me, lifeless as a body could be..."
nvlnarrator "My nice clothes are covered in bloodstains...{w} Maybe I should've put on some clothes I cared less about.{w} My hands are, of course, stained a deep red too."
nvlnarrator "My nice clothes are covered in bloodstains... {w} My hands are, of course, stained a deep red too."
nvlnarrator "It'll still be a few hours until she turns cold so I still feel a bit of warmth coming from her.{w} Her shoulder is touching mine.{w}
I'm not afraid to let her body lean on mine...{w} after all it was I who took her life."
nvlnarrator "Yeah...{w} It was all me.{w} Nobody else could've done it but me."
nvlnarrator ".........{w} I killed her......{w} It felt amazing."
nvlnarrator "So amazing I didn't get enough just from choking her.{w} So amazing I just had to cut her apart afterwards.{w} For no reason except my own pleasure."
nvlnarrator "So amazing I didn't get enough just from choking her.{w} So amazing I just had to cut her apart afterwards."
nvlnarrator "Feels like a weight in my chest has been lifted.{w} Is it because I've been running from this side of me all this time?"
advnarrator "I glance at the body to my side."
advnarrator "I think normally I'd be throwing up, but today, I didn't even flinch."
nvl clear
nvlnarrator "After all, why else would this feel so natural?"
nvlnarrator "It feels like there's a wall between myself,{w} and the gravity of the situation.{w} When I lay my hand on my chest I can feel my heart going so fast I should be
dead.{w} My hands are trembling, even, visibly.{w} Why, then, do none of these feelings really get to me?"
nvlnarrator "Is this just what it feels like?{w} To take a life?"
nvlnarrator "Somehow I understand that this out-of-body feeling is something I've known before.{w} To lose awareness of what my body's going through..."
play sound heartbeat_single
extend " though thinking back on it too hard now makes me feel a weird pressure in my skull."
nvl hide Dissolve(1.0)
combined "Shit..."
advnarrator "I whine, looking down and really taking in just how much I ruined my clothes."
advnarrator "A small feeling of regret tugs down on my heart."
advnarrator "Then, I glance at the body to my side, really get a good look at it."
advnarrator "......"
advnarrator "...{w} But that same feeling never comes..."
advnarrator "Really, normally I'd be throwing up, but today, I don't even flinch."
advnarrator "Just this once, I'm not letting a gruesome scene perturb nor disgust me."
advnarrator "Not even this plain reminder of our grotesque nature as people, which I hate so much to be a part of."
advnarrator "The unmaking of a person into the meat they're made of..."
advnarrator "Even that won't shake me now."
combined "But still, what a shame."
combined "It's never a good thing to see a life go to waste, is it?"