diff --git a/script.rpy b/script.rpy
index 9ebe4f3..e888a04 100644
--- a/script.rpy
+++ b/script.rpy
@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ label act1_part1:
     eyes has only changed more."
     nvlnarrator "I'm sure the same questions would come up in anyone's mind...{w} really, it makes me kind of self-aware to give them any space in my brain...{w} but how would someone in this position not start to
     question where their self begins and ends?"
-    nvlnarrator "When I see that parasite standing right beside me in the mirror, is it an extension of me?{w} If this burden only I can carry a part of me, could that be said of anyone?"
+    nvlnarrator "When I see that parasite standing right beside me in the mirror, is it an extension of me?{w} If this burden only I can carry is a part of me, could that be said of anyone?"
     nvlnarrator "I guess it's hard to compare when most of other people's problems have the decency not to talk back to them.{w} And it's hard to imagine something so evil coming out of me...{w} What could I have done
     to deserve something like that?"
 
@@ -649,22 +649,25 @@ label act2:
     null "Because you have no choice, right?"
     show null boast forced at bouncetransition
     null "Just like me!"
-    nvlnarrator "Stop making shit up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w}
-    Shut up."
+    nvlnarrator "Stop making shit up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} Shut up.{w} SHUT UP.{w} SHUT UP.{w} SHUT UP.{w} SHUT UP.{w} SHUT UP.{w} SHUT UP.{w}
+    SHUT UP!!"
     show null boast serious at bouncetransition
     null "We must be made of the same stuff."
     null "Just two no-good girls that start nowhere and lead nowhere."
-    nvlnarrator "I can't focus like this, so just shut up already!!!!!!!!{nw}"
+    nvlnarrator "I CAN'T FOCUS LIKE THIS SO JUST SHUT UP ALREADY!!!!!!!!{nw}"
     irida "Mrs. ◯◯!!!!!"
     incidental "I'm sorry?!"
     advnarrator "I realize quickly how loud I yelled that out."
     irida "S,{w} Sorry.{w} I'm sorry."
     irida "I meant...{w} I'm..."
+    advnarrator "My face goes ghostly pale."
+    advnarrator "...... I look down, and stammer."
     irida "I'm here to meet with Mrs. ◯◯."
     irida "... Sorry."
     show null boast smug at bouncetransition
     null "..."
-    hide null boast
+    scene black with Fade(2, 1, 0)
+    advnarrator "I don't wanna be here..."
 
     call static(1.8) from _call_static_1
     scene intersection_night
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